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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Building

Good story I thought - and much better than man sees mature woman, man bangs woman. For those who criticise, dont they ever flirt? Thats what this story is doing! Hope to read more and soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
So far so good.

Well written and very suggestive. Looking forward to more. Thank you.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Easy does it !

Enjoyable slow build up - I assume our Writer will get to the Money Shot soon - perhaps some really wild sexual goings-on! The story is nevertheless enjoyable. Awaiting the next Episode. Well Written! Pleasant Read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Slow boil

Very well written. I like the detail, and it makes me want to read more.

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