All Comments on 'On The Beach Ch. 03'

please continue the story i cant believe the effect it had on me

I usually don't go for the stories in the point of view of "you", but this was utterly awesome. The two things I think might have improved it are 1) Length and 2) Actualy dialogue. I loved the story, I just think that there's always room for improvement. Thanks for writing!! I really enjoyed it. :)

What an ending. You have left us hanging. Please continue!