All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 14'

I like the whole story (not only this episode), because it is a real story with a developing plot not a quicky. It is rare to read something like this on literotica but I would like to read more of it.Please Kathi

There's nothing like an old fool...eh Murphy.

You keep making this story better and better. I look forward to each chapter with an edge of excitement that keeps growing. I look forward to more excitingly "hard" chapters.