All Comments on 'On The Journey Home'

I do not usually make comments but this story deserved one. Very well written

Just wow really - that was a seriously erotic story: I love the exploration and discovery and that is such a turn on. Nicely written, thank you

I never comment, but this was really well done.

Excellently written! A delight to read!

So very well written, with passion and sensitivity. I'd like to read another chapter or two. Great job!

I'm not sure yet if this is your first ór one hundredth, but I'm totally amazed. Very sensual, erotic, slow nice build up, and great during the actual love making. Very nice, and very wet. Kudos! :-)

That was well written, it's captivating, carried me along while reading it and i could feel the emotion, the desire, lust, arousal, wetness and love. I've never read such an erotic story and gotten so turned on. keep writing please, and we will keep reading. thanks.

Extremely well written, and incredibly passionate. I hope you continue to write, you certainly do it well.

And folks, this is why I love being a lesbian. This is what woman lovemaking is all about.

Wording, writing, characters, scenes...it's all captivating! Encouraging me to enjoy my first time!

What a beautiful, wonderful story!

Lovely story, well written and incredibly steamy!

Except what everyone else seems to have said: well written, erotic, full of feelings expressed articulately, and without a cliched ending. I'm not sure there are more chapters in this. Had you gone the 'Honey i've been fucking a woman and so you can have your nights and I have mine' scenario then maybe. Or even the 'gets home to find husband fucking a woman and joins them to fuck the woman' then maybe. No, I liked the 'end the marriage, meet for sex but keep independence' one. It has a finality about it, yet my head as the reader can take it further if I want.