All Comments on 'One After The Other'

great sex! keep up the good work.

On of the best I've read in a while. Keep it going please!

My sister and I had "knowledge "of each other at a very early age.I want you all to understand that it extended into a mature relationship.That is nothing unusual,she remembered the first time "I lost my dick in my sister".I will never never forget when slightly pissed she said to me"come on,I am nearly on fire and he wont be home for hours"[her husband,a right twat] If you dont mind I will be anon.BUT HUNTER,is a good clue.How I miss my lovely sister[she died at 29].This is a true comment.

But not good either.

Now THAT'S how a story is written !!! Well written... hot story... so much better than the other crap that gets posted here. Thanks for sharing...

I think you are female[and a caring one at that].Never mind whether you are or not.I also think you love your brother,right or wrong?

If she is anything like my sister he would be f/////,after dealing with her ,never mind four others.A good story well worth a read.

It's hard to believe that no babies were conceived in this story. But you did not mention that or any birth control.

Iknow its fiction but I am in awe of Paul's staying power and ability to get it up four times in a row. Oh the joys of youth.

I must say the anal fucking was hard to believe. No one takes a big cock anally like that without prep and lots of lube

I know as someone who loves to be fucked in the ass.

It always disturbs me to see an author disregard the risk of infection. It is a total no to go from ass to pussy without a thorough cleansing!. You can do better.

What a waste, not dumping loads in all their pussies.