All Comments on 'One Hot Afternoon At The Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
LOVE SECONDS AND MORE

I have always love to enjoy a women that her hubby or boy friend pumped thier load in wife or girl friend. Their hot / horny after and Can continue keeping her hot. I perfure the couples to be 40 and older.

Thank you for enjoyable story openmined56

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Written by a man

Obviously written by a man pretending to be female. You can tell and it's less erotic as a result.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A suggestion

The story was pretty good but I kept losing the "feelgood" flow when I kept coming upon misspelled words and missused words. The theme was good just need practice and to proof read before posting the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
spell check!

This story is full of misspellings and grammar errors

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