All Comments on 'One Little World Ch. 01'

great job with this story. i enjoyed it and hope to read more with these characters. thank you for sharing your talents.

Excellent build to your story!

None of the unrealistic heavy "stuff".

As this is of particular interest to me, I'll be interested to see how James and Shannon progress...

Thank you.

personally i loved it, i mean it got me a little turned on but nothing major and yet i thought it was still really good.

I really love the characters, thank you for writing