All Comments on 'One Night Ch. 06'

by molly_hunter28

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schmoe_128schmoe_128over 16 years ago
LOVE it Molly

Love the story Molly, it's getting better and better with every chapter. I can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
When will you reveal

Mr. James' first name? It's hard to get fired up about a guy when he's always referred to so formally. It does serve to emphasize the boss-employee relationship and how screamingly inappropriate the whole thing is. <br><br>

It's certainly an elaborate way to see if your assistant <b>likes</b> you. I'm assuming she must have made her feelings obvious in the office already? The nasty devil, taking her to a sex club on their very first date no less. He doesn't beat around the bush does he!

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