All Comments on 'One Night Stand'

Not bad. Hope to read more from you.

The passion and the pathos come through. It's so beautifully written and yet so sad a tale. May the future be brighter... and please keep writing.

Cracking story lass please keep writing

I liked the part about how you controlled your anus to tease his tongue- very powerful and sensual - you must have real experience!

please.. Let someone proof read your work. The past tense is horrible - wetted - ?? I got in my Honda, I used to drive. It's just constructive critiscm, nice idea, just below average writing.

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This story sucked

Good thing I skipped over everything to get to the ass licking, in order to get off. When reading back, every other detail clearly came from a dumbass 18-year-old.....since this is supposedly a true story.

No one wants to read a damn sad ending to a sex story😔