All Comments on 'One Time Only'

Maybe you could have MOM be involved and have both of them done at the same time

I'm glad you didn't have the mom in it. It would have been too much.

ride and not badly written. I'm glad you didn't have mom involved either.

great story and good descriptions but it needs more sex. he should have sex with the daughter too.

I've read hundreds of submission stories - but this one made me feel physically sick, and for someone to write a story like this I think you've got a screw loose. Good luck for the next story you sick fuck.

that was a waste of my time...this is literotica...wheres the sex?

This wasn't exactly what I expected but I liked it better than most of the stuff I read on here. I kinda like that he never had sex with her, that wasn't what it was supposed to be about. ~ daisy

Would've been better of not posting at all ...

Disappointing ending. Good story but maybe they could have blindfolded her and let her Dad have her one time without her knowledge, as she's not going to know it's him amongst all the beating and rape that;s going on. i don't like stories that end in death, even if maybe they deserved Girls like Jessica get what they deserve, and i wouldn't be surprised if she enjoyed her ordeal on some level.

There's a difference between role play/fantasies of control and sick shit like this. Makes me wish submissions to this category were moderated.