All Comments on 'Only By Chance'

Was a very good story with a wonderful ending...

But one of them was definitely New York City.

I want more!!!

i just loved it so much. Thank you.

Oh gawd it makes me feel old when important cultural events from just a few decades ago are considered dusty old creaky ancient history by the oblivious.

loved the story please write more

I loved the story! Excellent writing and creative imagination to have Lacy -- a relative novice -- take the initiative in having sex with Lauren. I had to read that part again to make sure of what was happening. Great! Keep the stories coming...

I'll get the criticism out of the way first. Some of the dialogue is a bit unnatural and stilted. For instance, on page 2 a quotation from Lauren: "I want to touch your skin...uncovered all that is hidden from my view". Dear Lisa, people don't talk like that, especially modern young people---it's the sort of dialogue you'd find in a bad Victorian novel. When writing dialogue, talk through it to yourself and if it doesn't sound right, then rewrite it until it does. Right, that said, this is a very enjoyable little love story and I've given you a well-deserved five stars. I see you have a couple more stories on this site and I'm looking forward to reading them soon.

It's so nice to read a happy love story!

Thank you,

L

Aww I loved this little story. You just never know when you will find love.

Great writing! Very tender love story. Good sex too, but the tenderness of the love is so very believable.

I've read this several times and I love it more and more each time.

I don't know how I've missed this story all of this time, but I finally got to it, and it was great! thank you very much for sharing this with us!

I truly truly loved this romantic love story as doesnt matter if its leasbian or hetro! Tho doesnt matter but Im a straight guy who's ooen minded! Tho Actually I love lesbian romance more as chicks are so much more sensual with their actions & feelings so their srories are so touching! Plz write more and plz let me of other romantic love stories like this! As didnt want it to end! Thanks 🥰💖👍

I love an happy ending

Great love story!

I've now read all of your stories and wish there were more!

You have a lovely way of writing, so gentle and loving!

Please publish more!

Thank you