by pollystrachan
I loved it. A real turn-on. looking forward to more from Polly. wouldn't mind chatting with her.
Curious. Are you female? Reason I ask is the encounter in the basement is exactly how I would want a first encounter to go. Worship the bum first. And wanting to smell her before she showers - perfect. The very first time is always special and gets imprinted on the brain. Too bad everyone is so concerned with being perfect and so concerned with first impressions. There should be a way to tell a future lover that she should not shower for a day or two before the first time. ***** Usually only have time to read the wife stories. Glad I found your story. ***** Thanks.
Excellent. Well written, well structured, good characterisation and compelling plot. Much potential for development. More please!
really enjoyed the story well crafted but as others have said please don't leave it there
What a hot and sexy gem of a story. Thank you for the entertainment.
Well crafted nuances and hot, hot, hot! The strongest story I have had the pleasure to read on this site, Thanks!
The story has life to it. It seemed as the characters were real. Although they were cheating, it didn't seem to matter. Thanks for the well done story.....Rich
A lovely story. So compelling, honest and full of life. Sex aside, the feelings the author describes seem so authentic.
A much better story than if they had been so in lust for each other that they couldn't stay away or out of bed. I appreciated the build-up and the bit of a let down at the end, although there is the promise of more. Thanks.