All Comments on 'Only Go Around Once'

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easy_to_talk_to_measy_to_talk_to_mabout 15 years ago
Great turnon

I loved it. A real turn-on. looking forward to more from Polly. wouldn't mind chatting with her.

kelchakelchaabout 15 years ago
Interesting

Curious. Are you female? Reason I ask is the encounter in the basement is exactly how I would want a first encounter to go. Worship the bum first. And wanting to smell her before she showers - perfect. The very first time is always special and gets imprinted on the brain. Too bad everyone is so concerned with being perfect and so concerned with first impressions. There should be a way to tell a future lover that she should not shower for a day or two before the first time. ***** Usually only have time to read the wife stories. Glad I found your story. ***** Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Please don't leave it there

Excellent. Well written, well structured, good characterisation and compelling plot. Much potential for development. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
just brilliant

really enjoyed the story well crafted but as others have said please don't leave it there

FionaVolpeFionaVolpeabout 15 years ago
Lovely

What a hot and sexy gem of a story. Thank you for the entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story!

Well crafted nuances and hot, hot, hot! The strongest story I have had the pleasure to read on this site, Thanks!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
A beautiful story

The story has life to it. It seemed as the characters were real. Although they were cheating, it didn't seem to matter. Thanks for the well done story.....Rich

nevadakidnevadakidabout 15 years ago
Marvelous!

Marvelous story. I absolutely loved it! Please share more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Terrific!

A lovely story. So compelling, honest and full of life. Sex aside, the feelings the author describes seem so authentic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Ohhh soo hot

i am so hard love it storie

JRMAN84JRMAN84over 9 years ago
A Master piece

A Master piece, Where'd you go?

gordon_agordon_aover 6 years ago

Well-written and sexy. Wish you would write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent and well written story.

A much better story than if they had been so in lust for each other that they couldn't stay away or out of bed. I appreciated the build-up and the bit of a let down at the end, although there is the promise of more. Thanks.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Thanks For Sharing****

This has the making of some fun holiday gatherings.

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