- Interracial Love
- Only You Ch. 03
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All Comments on 'Only You Ch. 03'
by nerd4music
- 25 Comments
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoAs with your other stories they start fast and get better. Can't wait for the next Chapter
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoOnly two pieces of advice: just make sure to proofread a little more carefully, and more importantly, please write the next chapters as QUICKLY as possible! :D
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoDamn it! I should have been first. I have been checking for this chapter several x a day darn it. Great imagination u got there missy. I wonder about the missing condom. Hmmm... Along comes baby would be one heck of a surprise. On the other note nice chappie. Cheers!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoawesome! its like almost 5am here and im glad i stayed up! this chapter was wonderful!
SecretFantasy69almost 16 years agoIt is 5:42 in the am and here I am reading this and loving every single word. Oh my. Dont ever stop writing. And might I say that that was one hawt initiation. (wink)
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoThey are so cute together...that was a great update. Thanks
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoThat was just amazing. These two are perfect for each other and Anyone can see that. But a major problem that Derek still has is that he may be done but she fell asleep so i can still see some major fireworks coming soon. I hope Teagan and Derek can make it through in the end. I can't wait for the next update. This one was a winner!!!!
MilkChocolateAmazonalmost 16 years agoYour characters always have so much spunk. Love these two, they're soo good together. Obviously I see problems ahead but they are so meant to be. Love Derek and I'm so in agreeance with Tegan; his tattoo's are hot! Can't wait for the next one.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI really like this story . I wonder if Tagen find out about Dereks girlfriend .. Anyways im all excited pls post soon : )byee
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI am just wondering how Drea knew that Derek has a "cokehead girlfriend"? And why she did let Tegan know about this?
hotcocoa6904almost 16 years agoThat was damn good and I absolutely love the characters!!! I hope that Carrie or Lottie doesn't ruin anything!!! Excellent job, don't make us wait too long for the next one!!
orexisvoluptasalmost 16 years agoYour writing gets better as you go. I've read ALL of your submissions and each one gets better. You are simply fabulous. I love, love, love "Only You". Tegan J and Derek are too hot together. You've set the stage for quite a few different scenarios and I can't wait to see the outcome between them. Marvelous, marvelous work.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoThis was awesome...the love scene was HOTT! I can't wait for the next installment.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI am so loving this story. I am so thankful you finally added a chapter. I was checking every day several times a day. I love your characters and how they fit together so well. I figure they will have to deal with the crackhead ex but in the end they will be happy. Til then I am all in. Please update real soon.
ColorofLovealmost 16 years agoThe scenes are fabulous, love Tegan's friend Drea....and the story is smoking, and fun to read. Enjoyed.
yanique1985almost 16 years agoI LOVE EVERYTHING U WRIGHT I JUST CANT GET ENOUGH, I HAVE SERIOUSLY BEEN ON THIS THING JUST TO READ THIS SOOO AWWWWSOME
Anonymousover 15 years agoThat was freaking amazing. Brilliant really. I love Derek and Tegan. What a way to lose one's virginity. And he looks like Adam Brody, dear lord.
THELOVELY1GLOover 13 years agoAlways break off things with your ex, before moving forward with the new........
EuphoriaSlam69over 11 years agoNo matter how much of a twat Lottie is depicted as - dumping her by phone, when she's snoring! Are you serious??? LOLz! Shit is gonna go DOWN! I was playin' Pussy Liquor and Living Dead Girl whilst reading this story! Brilliant nerd4music! Genius!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoSUCH a dick, to break up with his loser girlfriend AFTER the fact. Couldn't be bothered to do it before, I guess. Ol' Derek is my least favorite of all your male characters, but I love your stories otherwise!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThe writing is good, the characters are fun, but the no condom thing is just so bugging!!! I mean this is the 21st century, the girl is a virgin, suposedly not on pill, she met the guy 48 hours ago, she has enough clear head to tell him she is a virgin but none of them think about protection? Just a fucking condom, the sex can be as great and it also allow to have an extra scene when they decide to go without . Seriously, folks, this is so reactionary!!!
