All Comments on 'Only You Ch. 05'

Loooved it. Have been waiting for it to come out. <3 Perfect as always

Excellent, Excelent. Bringing lottie back at the end. Oh I wonder what Derek is gonna do then. I love they way you write period. Your stories are crack and i'm scratching my neck with chapped lips. Keep writing please!!!

This was a great update...I was wondering when she was going to show her ugly head...that Lottie is crazy. She don't know who she messing with though. I hope that Tegan is up tp the challenge to stand by her man and kick that heifers arse. Thanks for a gret read.

....would give us this totally awesome update and then leave us hanging on a cliff. Damn good chapter and I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for Tegan and Derek!! Awesome!!

Oh snap! It's about to get heated up in here!

I knew that cracked out bitch would come back to haunt D-Rye! Heh.

God, Only You is the hottest story I have ever read! Tegan reminds me of myself except for the lip ring hehe but I definitely cannot wait until ch 6! I smell DRAMA!!

Chapter five was awesome. I had an idea it was going to be one of the ladies who told this guy about them. I was shocked at the end to see it was Lottie.

WCD

I hope we don't have to wait quite so long for the next chapter though. Thanks for writing!

LOVED IT!!! That dang Lottie is CRAZYYYY! I love how they "like" each other, LOL. the update was worth the wait, and I so look forward to more!

...it's going down now! Things are about to get damn interesting. Bring on chapter 6!

I can't believe that she set this whole thing up and now she is going to show her face to them. Awww Tegean once again is going to be caught off guard. I am just happy that she was able to meet his family before this happens. I think she needed to know that she is the first person that Derek let meet his family. That was great, i Really loved this chapter and with the lenght and how good it was it was completely worth the wait. GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!

ok so I gotta say FREAKIN AWESOME... I am addicted to all your stories like a crack head but I will say that I am a

NERD HEAD INSTEAD.......LOL

HURRY WERE ALL DYIN WAITIN ON #6 and may you find peace with your upheaval

Love the story, about damn time that the younger Ryan got hooked up. Can't wait to see how far Tegan makes Lottie's teeth fly.

LOVED IT!!!!!

Great update! Crazy Lottie has GOT to be stopped in the next chapter! Right?

Plot twist much? Boy oh, boy. Well I know Lottie's theme song - Crazy Bitch.

That can't be good. Such a good ending

to the chapter though

omg....OMG

While this is a slammin' plot twist.....Derek and Tegan are sensing a whole lot of things on several levels. They have some idea it ain't all it's appearing to be. Oooooooh so very bitch.

Shit was gonna hit the fan innit!

So good but damn that lottie