All Comments on 'Opening Z Ch. 22'

What happened to all the build up and the teasing and edging from the previous chapters. This story started off with Z being straight until he slowly slipped into more liberal behavior. At one point he was nervous to even tell his brother how his lifestyle was changing and then bam all of a sudden he's having a hardcore threesome with his brother. I'm not saying that it wasn't hot...just that it's not going along with the theme of the story. This could have been so much hotter had there been more buildup and shyness and slow exploring with Jason & Z..and even with Sam too.

My brother and I really do understand each other....the talk we had on the ride to the cabin cleared the way for us to have the adventures with Sam. I'm a damn good writer...slightly fictionalizing my own story....the arc of the story of how it happened....I did alter some details because I don't kiss and tell without constent. Thanks for your comments. Z

Every bit of it - keep up the good work!

I thought you weren't ever going to comeback. I have been waiting for this since the last one was posted. Lol Love Love Love this series

Love these stories. Well written and hot! Can't wait for the next chapter. You're a stud.

Any new story bro :)

Loooove these stories, greatly written, definitely so very hot. But we need some more! It's been way too long since the last chapter.

So ducking hot!!