All Comments on 'Opportunities in Bad Economic Times'

Please spellcheck/edit. You lost me a couple times - "armature" or "amateur"?

You could have a winner if you take your writing seriously .Remember that your readers aren't fools and if you don't write well then you won't have readers .

If you watch what you are writing and spell check you will go far. You should watch the way you write for example you had the character telling the ladies they DID have to look at the other pictures if they were uncomfortable. I think you meant to say they DIDN'T have to look. Basically a good story.

for women/moms like myself..dad/son(s) should be recruited too for hottt pics/movies in your scenerio...even hot families..preferably "bi"...and since your two characters are "bi" inclined...should be no problem..and definetly hottt..and what sex charged ladies/moms like myself really turn-on too...

No, I think he spelled bar correctly every time.

When will you contiue this story?

The word is AD, or ADS, short for advertisement.

Just one of many spelling/grammar errors.