All Comments on 'Opposite Worlds Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Kinda Like a Filler Chapter...

... Short and sweet, but without much body. Personally, I would have liked to have heard more about his day, than hers.

Still a very good overall story and definitely above average writing, just hope this chapter was productive for the overall story.

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