All Comments on 'Options Ch. 04'

Good story, but please don't write accent, it makes dialogue unreadable

I'm grateful that you at least left off with an idea of where the plot would have gone if you had decided to continue. I can see that you haven't submitted for a while, so I won't demand another chapter. But if you end up reading this: you are an imaginative and thoughtful writer. All of the characters were very strongly developed, and I was especially pleased with Stacy and how you introduced an Asian character without turning her into a fetish. It's rare to see that happen in any work of writing, let alone in porn. If just for that alone, I would love to see where this story was meant to go, but if it isn't in the cards, then I'm happy to settle for this as an "ending".

I really appreciate the comments. Life has gotten a little complex lately so writing has taken a back seat. But there are a couple of chapters more in the computer. Who knows? Maybe I'll be able to finish this.

Thank you.

PygmyCoho

There's an explicit masturbation scene on page one - hardly non-erotic.

I thought about what category to choose, and went for Non-Erotic because this installment has a bit less sex in it than other chapters of the story. I'd rather "undersell" it than disappoint readers who expected more action.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it very much.

PygmyCoho

Do you plan on continuing the story?

You have set yourself up for a very fine follow-on series with Stacy & Hailey (and maybe one more Shelly & Barbara chapter?) . Hope you are able to successfully work through whatever has been going on in your life and gift us with more of your excellent writing...

Really enjoyed the story and hope you write more.