All Comments on 'Original Sin Ch. 03'

by Karolina

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Tis great!

I feel for Cathy... but please write more chappies! It's a very engaging story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Addicted

Karolina,

Just wanted to let you know i have been waiting a long time for the 3rd chapter. Don't take too long for your next fab chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WOW!! what a chapter!

WOW!! I'm still trembling & shocked....This is one of the best sex scenes I have ever read!!!!!!! eagerly waiting for next chapter,thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
LOVING IT

I just wanted to say how much i am enjoying this story and i cant wait till the next chapter, the sex scene was great but the story line is just fantastic, it brought me to tears it was FANTASTIC!!! keep up the good work...xxxooo

raven616raven616almost 13 years ago

Poor girl everyone hates her...

you made me a few times cry....

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Yeah, the rape dropped you down to a one. Violence and rape is NOT sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WAY too much seducing and acceptance from the girl. Horrible story.

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