All Comments on 'Orphan Ch. 01'

You have been missed. Am enjoying your story..write on!

I cannot begin to express how good this beginning has been to read. You are so amazingly talented. Please hurry with the next installment.

Very well written. I'm looking forward to the next instalment!

A very interesting story. I'm curious as to why this is in 'Nonhuman' though. I'll wait to see what happens next.

excellent start can not wait for the story to continue

Maybe your absence ,has given the motivation to something new? An I love it. I read a lot of nonhuman stories, This is great,but please do not turn this into a novel. I know other readers do love them, but life is short and I like to find out the ending before I drop dead. Do not want to offend anybody, that s just me. But still , can not wait for the next chapter.

what a nice start! will definitely be waiting for the next chapter. (just don't forget the other two ;-) )

Great start to what I hope is a long story.

amazing start! cant wait till the next chapter love it

I will be watching for new chapters. I really like yur writing style. Can not wait to see where his super strength comes from.

What a terrific read! Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.

i love how you wrote this first chapter and will be looking for more to come...

Donna

Well done. Please continue.

I can't wait to read more of this story!

When I'm in the mood for a new read, I look for something that does a grab for my attention right off and then keeps going. You've got the grab. Keep it coming!

This is a great story, I can feel the emotions of the character as I read. Great Job!!!!! Can't wait for the next installment.

This was a great start can't wait to read more. gaelicvampire

Please please please more this chapter just snagged me and I can't wait for the next chapter

Definitely will put this story in my favorites. A few typos, but other than that, I didn't see any mistakes. Interesting story line...I can already see there is going to be serious drama in the future. ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo-Lily

I wonder what they all are. He seems to be like them. He's definitely odd but still very likable. I'm assuming he and Jena will become an item. She might be just what he needs to heal emotionally. Looking forward to the next chapter.

You have really made Dane come alive. I'll be watching for more.

This segment was excellent and really has left me wondering how soon you will release the next issue.

Great work.

Thanks

First you put out the first chapter of a new story (which I love!) and to add the icing to the cake...you have Alexander riding through one of the prettiest areas I've ever ridden myself! I've ridden my Harley through Cody, WY and up through Red Lodge, MT on my way to Glacier National Park (the long way, from Virginia). :-) So to say the least, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes from here! Great work!!!

I lovelovelove this story!

I know it's just going to absolutely kill me once you finally bring this fabulous story to a thrilling and oh-so satisfying conclusion (which hopefully won't be for a longlonglooong time).

I await with bated breath for your next chapter. <3

I hope you will be adding more to this story soon. Thanks for a good read.

I HATE stumbling on to Ch 1 of a really great story. Patience may be a virtue but good writing is such a gem I don't want to wait for more. Fortunately I can catch up on your other stories and keep an eye on "Orphan".

More this is already the fifth time I've read this chapter.

Its been too long..need a chapter or few

only one question. How did the fuel so suddenly ignite? Is this the Hollywood Multiverse?

Thank you for this series, this is just amazing. Don't stop writing please.

Just starting out in this story and already hooked from the first chapter.

You've captured Alexander's wanderlust and inner loneliness exceptionally well. I just know there's more to him than meets the eye and am looking forward to discovering what it is.

You have a great writing style. Can't wait to read more :-)

You've obviously not been around many wrecks friend... Fuel doesn't even need a good reason to suddenly explode... Many different things can set it off in a heartbeat... It is entirely believable that it would suddenly explode like that...

i read it from the beginning why you stop ?

Please why did you stop orphan I love the story please..................!!!!!!!!!!!!

NO ENDING TO STORIES SEEMS TO BE A COMMON THEME WITH THIS WRITER..Have started 3 stories,all with no endings,and as they are posted in 2008,,,an ending is doubtful.....

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Thanks for posting!

time to see where this leads.

of the 20 projected chapters the author projected in this series they ended at 10. No resolution. No completion. No word. No hope.

unless you are feeling masochistic save yourselves the frustration and stop now, just as the author has.

because it is SO good. Even knowing there isn't an ending, I can't help but read it.

Once or twice a year I come back and reread this great story hoping that he will come back and finish it someday. Most stories once they do not update for a year I just forget about but this one is good enough to keep me hoping.

Was seeeming to be good, then I seen the comments. Uuuuggghhh!!!

I'm a continuation writer, if I get enough feedback - my email contact is on the site on my bio - then i'll start this one up

JC

These stories are all very good. Please come back to finish the story. It’s so great

Good stuff

As good as this story could be, it isn’t finished. Whether the author got bored, tired or plagiarised and decided to quit Lit, it makes no odds, I can’t upvote an unfinished story, that’d be encouraging more readers to come here and be disappointed as have I and several others.