All Comments on 'Orphan Ch. 02'

i can ponder a guess, but i will not, interesting story so far, a lot of mystery and vagueness , but also very engrossing hope to see chapter three soon

cant wait for the next chapter very interesting story

very interesting can not wait for your next installment

release these chapter FAST enough for my liking... its that good...

I want the damn book so i can sit and read it from front to back in one sitting...

GERRR sooo interesting... dammmmmnnn u...

Is he part were then? Oh, I hate having to wait for answers! This is a good story and I have no complaints against the writing. Now that your mind has been eased, you'll have no problem writing more, will you?!

Good story so far. What happened to Avenging Angels?

VJax a very nice story can't wait for the next chapter

I have been waiting for a little while for you to add more to this story. I hope that there will be more to come soon.

good story with a good plot and plenty of mystery. You appear to have taken your time and thought this through. keep it up

this is getting more interesting by the minute! in a way you know a lot and yet you don't, all covered up in mysteries.

Like the others have said, way to pull and tug us along! The mystery definitely has me curious, and I am not disappointed with this chapter one bit. It will definitely keep me coming back for more.

Update soon, V! =)

xoxo-LilyA

We knew that promising mayhem if you didn't come back soon would work. LOL!

Why would you just stop there? By the way, if the clinic could find a way to repair that knee, it would be so amazing, and I might consider forgiveness.

I'm really looking forward to part 3 and beyond.

The pictures you paint, the characters, the intrigue!

Looking forward to more of this story!

I'm as anxious as Jenabel. I can't wait to see what happens when she sees him awake. Will he have a similar reaction to her? What are they? What is he? So many questions! Looking forward to the next chapter.

I know two stories don't make a series. However, I am oh so hoping for another chapter. I can't wait to find out what everybody is. But I know a good series will give more questions than answers 'til near the end.

Excellent writing as always, and like the others, I can't wait to see what is next. You really make the characters come alive and it's so easy to get wrapped up in their 'lives'.

It just gets more intriguing as it goes along. I'm really enjoying this story. The characters capture the attention and the whole mystery around not only Alexander but also the town pulls the reader in.

.... but disappointed at the editing. mikothebaby appears to have just used the MS Word spellchecker to edit this :S

Wow. I can not recall the last time a book held me in such suspense, wait yes I can, it was the 90s and it was a Stephen King book I think. So yeah I have felt this build maybe 2ce in my life. I LIKE IT. I am not a sci fi reader and not much for horror but this story is friggin awesome so far!!!

awesome story

a deep reaction to the handshake.

a tradition of marriage with another family 100 miles away.

a strong attraction

so many little clues and hints at the mysterious.

Love the story havent read one this great since the Rose series

This is basically retold version of The Silver Guardian by Daddyirishman

If this story was posted in 2011 and DI’s story in 2018?

Maybe you should check your facts before you start posting accusations.