All Comments on 'Our Babysitter'

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ethanjones1943ethanjones1943over 17 years ago
please continue this

Loved it please continue the story line.

ethan

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
MORE!!! MORE!!!

So the wife and the girl were comparing notes huh? what else where they sharing? Run with the idea that the two girls are in this together!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
a good story

great story be careful with those dreams they can get you into trouble

Pat

Atlanta,Ga.

Ploni_AlmoniPloni_Almoniover 13 years ago
It Feels Like a Too-Short Punch Line...

I really liked the setup, the (fast) sex part. But there were bits left over, like what was going on between the two women. Feels like there was room for more chapters in terms of Tuesday's side of this. And how it would continue to roll as Amy continues to stay there. Great setups for getting caught, getting accommodations and any number of other things.

Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So she kills her husband and Flys of to the Bahamas without any charges being made. Right really believable.

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