All Comments on 'Our Family Physician Ch. 02'

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Danno_61455Danno_61455almost 12 years ago
WILDLYEROTIC STORY TELLING

You have a wonderfully light touch to descriptions of passion. I have enjoyed both of these pieces of fiction very much. Looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Attention to Detail

I really have enjoyed these two chapters. I love the attention to detail--describing the clothing, panties, etc helps to paint a very vidid picture of what is taking place. Can't wait for the next chapter(s)!

jusdafaxjusdafaxalmost 12 years ago
This should be labled a cheating wife story

When it was a threesome, there was equality in the group. In this case, the two women purposely planned and carried out an assignation without him. That's cheating and if I was him, I'd be pissed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A great story!

I hope you add a new chapter. This series is great! Would love to read more of Susan and friends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

This is a ver sensual and sexy tale! Keep writing!

rudilrudilalmost 3 years ago
now wet a minute

Love the detail and attention regarding feminine scent and taste.

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