All Comments on 'Our Friend Katelyn'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good start

Try to be less clinical. And tell more of a story. This was a bit all over the place. No chance for erotic tension to build.

akwildmanakwildmanalmost 13 years ago
Wow!

Damn, that was so hot! Thanks for sharing!

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