All Comments on 'Our Honeymoon'

The paragraphs were a little long but there was good use of detail. However, I think the dialogue would have been much smoother and natural had there been editing done.

This was well written - a good balance. It's so nice to see this kind of story about a happily married couple.

I enjoyed the story. Would like to see more of this continued. Everhow you decide to expand it. Good work no stars here to select so I'll say 4 stars