All Comments on 'Our Night with Leah'

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MafenMafenabout 2 years ago

Poor effort. All wham, bam, thatnk-you mam!" No effort or tension; no build up; no personality in the characters.

Sentences like "She tasted so good I could not wait to taste her sweet juices" make no sense. You didn't have to wait; you already did it!

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