All Comments on 'Our Parties Ch. 02'

This is a much stronger instalment than the first, allowing the characters more room to explore their sexual gameplay. I really liked the section with Julie & Phil, and wished you'd spent a little longer on that.

My only major criticism is the way everyone seems to orgasm almost instantly; it's both unlikely and premature in narrative terms.

For your next chapter, how about Phil and his girlfriend demonstrating their techniques on Tom and Julie, maybe with a little assistance from the housemaid?

much hotter than the first. Hope to see more. Maybe the next party could have a BDSM theme.

Wish you had told of what the other couples did.

This is a great well written series with a novel theme.

I scored this 4 stars. It was going to be 5 stars all the way until I got to halfway down the last page. CP does nothing for me and that last bit was a shocker and tinged some of the pleasure out of reading the story. I really loved the whole set up and it was well written. I particularly liked the different 'takes' in the writing. This will not stop me from searching your other stories for more pleasure.