All Comments on 'Our Son, The Porn Star Ch. 02'

terrific premise of having two bi nudist families swing with each other...but...would be even better if you made their dialogue much more sex charged..people into all this hot totally uninhibited bi sex action would be far more "dirty" in their sex talk..and would really increase their over-all sex...and make your story red hotttttt! ! and besides hot butts ..tell us more about their physical attributes...especially the guys' thighs/barefeet...women like myself find those body parts sooo hot on studs...also how about having these 2 families return to the nudist resort..so you could include other bi families for even more hot swinging action including hot watersports

That was fucking intense

Very hot action, really great! I want to be at the next party.

wow!! 5 stars. lots of hot action... great read

Almost too much fucking described. Almost!

My father appeared in a few adult films in his later years,65 to be exact,I was so embarrassed knowing that people knew what my father was doing,some of my friends teased me about him and had seen some of his films, on nights out they would flirt with him especially my friend tammy from work,she'd tease me saying that he has a big cock! Eventually I saw one of his films and at first I couldn't look but convinced myself to watch two girls that looked 20 sucking his cock,tammy wasn't lying! My father's cock was big! And he knew how to use it,tammy wasn't in work on the Monday the following week which was strange,I tried calling her but there was no answer,I had a doctors appointment at lunchtime and went home after it deciding to call over my dad's house on the way,I had a key and let myself in and walking towards the living room could see my dad and tammy naked on the couch with tammy riding him! It was an odd sensation I felt and continued watching,tammy got off him and kneeled on the floor giving him a blowjob! She laughed trying to fit it all in her mouth and only managed half of it! Put it back in me she told him sticking her bum in the air, moaning and giggling at the same time as dad fucked her,a hot flush came over me and I unbuttoned my blouse then my phone rang and dad and tammy immediately turned to see me at the door with my blouse open,please don't be angry with me tammy said! Does it look like she's angry my father said meaning my blouse being wide open,he looked at me with his big cock pointing upwards! It was hard not to look at it and tammy could see I was looking at it! I just had to she said rubbing it with her hand! Then giving him another blowjob,dad told her to lick his balls not intending to I felt my tits unclipping my bra! I looked at my dad's big cock as my friend sucked his balls,I pinched my nipples moving my hand to my skirt,I undid the metal clip and let it slip down,my father looked at me with my tits out and just my knickers on! He pulled tammy to her feet and pushed her over his dining table,Tammy's eyes shut as dad's cock entered her pussy! Fuck yes she gasped,dad fucked her hard and fast,I felt my wet pussy through my knickers before dad told me to take them off! Yeah like that he said, play with it, I rubbed my clit watching my father have sex with my friend, I had to sit down as my legs were like jelly,I sat on one of the dining chairs and opened my legs playing with my clit, nice bush tammy said! As dad made a face cumming in her pussy

Pretty oral heavy, which is ok. The story suffers from what i have to watch for in my own writings: too much instantaneous switching between to many partners. This comment is as much a critisim of myself as this author.