All Comments on 'Out of Control Ch. 04'

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ronia5lmfronia5lmfover 16 years ago
building suspense

Every episode of this story leaves me wanting more! Sometimes I get confused about how much time is passing between sections, but I love the build up. Nice work

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Clarity

The plot line is straight forward. However, you should read a little more about this genre'. His actions show that he is a somewhat callous and inexperienced DOM. He did not clearly layout the rules of conduct to her and then punished her for violating a rule she did not know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hmmm

I’ve never had a drug problem but I’m still pretty sure that this isn’t normal for rehab 😉

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