All Comments on 'Out Of The Shadows Ch. 03'

I really enjoy your stories a lot, and have read nearly all of them so far. But lately I am missing the different points of view in your story telling. I always thought that you did that really well, something that only very few writers accomplish. Shame that you've gone off it. Still, good work. Keep it up!

Cannot wait for chapter 4!!!!

Wow ...this is fabulous. I cant wait to read more. You must be the best writer here. I love all ur stories. Hope u keep writing

Really, I can't wait for more. All of your stories are so amazing

What a way to stop! Keep us hanging, why don't you! Lol! :p POV or not, thats not what makes a story. You keep us bound, captivated, eager for more and that's about the best ingredients you can throw in there! Love you stories, any style - doesn't matter. Keep up the good work deary.. Cat

Your always leaving me and everyone hanging! Your stories are great and I can't stop reading them. Don't take so long in submiting the chapter.

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o NJ<USA

You are driving me nuts write more and soon I love this story it's sooooooo HOT!!!! Please please write more.

Yeah, baby! We arrive at hot juicy sex in the kitchen. The tantalizing sexual tension is still there, as the flux of feelings and confessions swirls around our conflicted heroes. But now we are at the nitty gritty, beautifully written and paced. Grab an extra towel, kiddies, and let me at the next chapter!

I had chills the whole time while reading this!

still good

Thank you so much for a beautifully written story. I just finished Chapter 03 and have appreciated the author's masculine point of view and story-telling style that pulls the reader in to the hilt!! I also enjoyed being toyed with in keeping the first actual physical experience until the end of Chapter 03. Anticipation!