by DinaDevereux
Enjoyed this tale I don't think I could have last as long as Malcolm to give the young lady what she needed, I would have done better than her ex boyfriend and have been more caring for her with her job. Malcolm certainly "worked her over well".
Very good. Keep on writing, especially stories of this genre (BM_WW, risk of pregnancy)
THAT WAS HOT. MORE STORIES OF BROTHUA'S SAVING DAY IN MORE THAN ONE WAY. MORE PAGE'S AND CHAPTERS. YOU GOT A HIT ON YOUR HANDS HERE.
Excellent story I cannot wait for more chapters. Keep it coming.
still sweating...too hot....going to take a really cold shower
thanks for your comments! i'm hoping to have chapter 2 on here this week!
Please continue this story until it gets boring. Right now it isn't and I have to find out how this plays out. There has to be more! It sounds like a good start of a long adventurous thing. NICE!
I would LOVE to see another chapter of this.
good story , very believable and true sounding, any white girl would squirt on his cock yumme, hope we can read some more