All Comments on 'Overworked and Worked Over'

by DinaDevereux

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cockcriticcockcriticalmost 7 years ago

Enjoyed this tale I don't think I could have last as long as Malcolm to give the young lady what she needed, I would have done better than her ex boyfriend and have been more caring for her with her job. Malcolm certainly "worked her over well".

Lynn_MXXLynn_MXXover 11 years ago
Loved it!

Very good. Keep on writing, especially stories of this genre (BM_WW, risk of pregnancy)

BlackRexxxBlackRexxxover 12 years ago
DARK KNIGHT'S

THAT WAS HOT. MORE STORIES OF BROTHUA'S SAVING DAY IN MORE THAN ONE WAY. MORE PAGE'S AND CHAPTERS. YOU GOT A HIT ON YOUR HANDS HERE.

DarkTemptation434DarkTemptation434over 12 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story I cannot wait for more chapters. Keep it coming.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
*wipes sweat off my body

still sweating...too hot....going to take a really cold shower

DinaDevereuxDinaDevereuxover 12 years agoAuthor
working on chapter 2 now

thanks for your comments! i'm hoping to have chapter 2 on here this week!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
MOOOOORRRE!!!

Please continue this story until it gets boring. Right now it isn't and I have to find out how this plays out. There has to be more! It sounds like a good start of a long adventurous thing. NICE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Part 2? Cuz this shit was hot.

I would LOVE to see another chapter of this.

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 12 years ago
nice

good story , very believable and true sounding, any white girl would squirt on his cock yumme, hope we can read some more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what a dirty white slut

White cunts sure know how to ride a big black dick

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