All Comments on 'Paean to L & S: or a Love Supreme'

I love Larissa!

You're talent and command for the language, along with your evident love of reading for the sheer joy overwhelm me. You vividness of setting the scene is lovely. I do not have the words to commend yours, the only word that comes to mind is awesome. I very much enjoy your words. Thank you.

You're a wonderful storyteller. I love the humour and real life details in the beginning of your story - they were amusing and connected me to the lovers. ...and it was so tender and then would turn sensual and then passionate. I love the tequila ritual that gets them into the love making - just delightful!

LOVED IT, GOT WET mmmmmmmm