All Comments on 'Pain Relief'

I think there's potential here, and you're a decent technical writer (i.e., the grammar, spelling, diction, structure, etc. contribute to the story rather than detracting from it), but the story doesn't really have any dramtic tension or any feeling of any emotion whatsoever. The protagonist has an unexplained ability to set up "command blocks" that appear to always work. There's no history, no character, really not much other than the mechanical acts described.

It needs to be. It's in a hospital.

rubbish