All Comments on 'Pandora's Mission Ch. 02'

No no no, Hades is not the Christian hell, it's where everyone goes after they die in Greek myth, good and bad. The bad have special torments sometimes but not firey pits to my recollection. Certainly not normally. Don't mean to moan, nice concept for your story. If you avoid mistakes like that and have a little action my vote will increase. :-)

Nice start. Would like to see longer chapters. Hope to see more of this story