All Comments on 'Paper Girl'

But I afraid that it was pure fantasy in the second half.

Now the first half sounded very realistic except for the willingness of Becky to provoke him instead of calling a dirty old man.

That was a nice start for the series if you choose to add more chapters. It would be nice to see the old man get the paper girl in bed once. It is also nice to see that the neighbor across the street was hard for him. I can hardly wait to see the next chapter if you choose to write it.

Great start, you musy turn this into a series please.

I have enjoyed several of your stories so I quickly started reading this one. It was fun for me that I was able to foresee a few of the scenes - that Harriet and Dan would end up getting together and that Harriet was nude under that heavy ugly housecoat. I have no problem with Becky being interested in older men - as a male I've been interested in much older women since puberty, so why would it be that different for a female and older men? I do like the mix of fantasy and realism your stories often have. I can enjoy the realistic tone but also get off on the fantasy aspect. I waited to read Chapter Two because I wanted to judge this story on its own merits. Thanks for an enjoyable read. Have to go now because I want to get started on the next chapter.

about younger women and older men...for a couple of years i was in charge of a group of high school to maybe 29 year old girls at least 30 years younger than me. you would be surprised how many butts rubbed against me or breasts tiuced my hand or asrm as i explained something. or the very thnily veiled invitations. i would have been delighted to fuck ant or all of them or uintroduce them to the pleasure of a tongue lickibg their pussy...but common sense told me only one had to react in the wrong way, regardless of how much teyn teased a,d i would be off to jail. young girls are just as horny as boys their age. i just wish i had realized it when i was their age.

Perhaps you can introduce Harriet to Becky and vice versa and the two of them want to start fucking you, with Becky trying to have your baby?

We all dream of that shit happening - ah well -

Well and truly and got her hosed down....a Wont be long before he is plumbing the paper girl......a good bit of fun....

God, yes. A papergirl like that and I would have mauled my adorable wife at 60 or 70.