All Comments on 'Paradise Turns Hell Ch. 01'

DHOPE THE REST OF THIS STORY HAS ALOT MORE PAIN INVOLVED ON HER BODY.

can't waot 2 c wat happens to her and abdul

It definitely has a lot more pain. and yeah something about abdul too.. will submit it in a couple of days.. should get approved in 3-4 days.. keep checking this space..

and thanks for the appreciation.

Very well written story. It is erotic from every side and speaks to the darker fantasies.

Some good scenes in the story. The author needs to find a better way of explaining terminology or cultural items than giving a description in brackets.

thanks for your comment.. will keep ur suggestions in mind for the next time.. thanks. its just my second story and i believe there is room for improvement even in the most perfect writings.

hope i can do a better job in the next part. thanks again.

a slower submission would be hot...but very good...cant wait for more-hope hubby has too watch

nice story could not stop reading

I love how you point no fingers and you are right not to point any. In America and any country there are people who are never happy and angry enough to do violence to strangers for reasons all there own. It rarely has to do with religion or race we can imagine black men, brown men or even green men as the terrorists well done!

Loved it. Wanted a little more metal bondage. The narration is splendid. Finding a fellow indian bdsm story writer is a blessing.