All Comments on 'Party Deep'

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needs an editor

has no point

husband doesn't appear to care OR get excited

just really, where were you going with this?

I like this story. Wives need parting and all sex once in a while. Husbands should let their wife have this happen. My wife use to drink a lot. When we got married she could not have kids. I let her have a good time at parties. Connie loved to drink and show her body. Men would love to play and have sex with her. She would take on our friends. Our friends kept her safe. They would bring friends around for her for sex. My co-worker would meet her and then tell me about it and some aid they wish their wives would do this. Most of them did this and I did it to them. Leave yor wives have fun and you will like it

What's the point here writing shit like this? the loving wife topic REALLY becomes a drag , this is just another story about the same messed up people ,utterly uninteresting,i gave it one * for the effort

I have to agree with the comments...This is one of the worst stories in LW...And that says it all about it...

another true to life story... NOT my cup of tea..There are couples like this out there..

1*

No more needs to be said.

I left off the "d" but then you should "Die"

To previous commenter:

What?

Please don't write any more.

...no one, not even the wimpiest little coward would leave his unconcious wife with a few drunk rapiests, risking them passing her all kinds of STD´s. Leaving her totally unprotected in her own house with those social and mental drop-outs while "going to work" is far beyond anything I could accept could possibly happen. Even if she failed him, - he failed far more, just standing by, watching. Perhaps it would have been more appropriate to point out the differences between being a cuck or simply "yellow". I do not like cuckolds - but I would hate the behaviour he showed. Sorry...but this story was not enjoyable for me.Fetched too far to be a good read.

1*

Get a life and quit writing. You sicko

Wife with an alcohol problem, punishment for her, allows the STATUTORY RAPES TO CONTINUE. Yes, this is exciting. I agree with some of the others. This is sick for a story.

It makes it so much easier to spot the subhumans who figured out how to use a word processor. I'm really trying to be sympathetic for a sick fuck like you. But you need to admit your illness and go get some help. I'm embarrassed to admit you and I share the same genus and species.

Trouble is there are perverts like this sick SOB. -5

What they said!

I was checking the comments to see if the story is worth reading, and if you got some Anonymous weenie this upset, I assume it's a fantastic story and I'd better read it. Doing so right after I post this.

The flurry of comments above is precious! I'm loving it.

You seem to thrive on negative reinforcement. If that gives you your jollies okay. To me, it was gross and monotone.

and is loved by all. TK U MLJ LV NV

one thing missing ,

if you were going to treat your wife in this way

then surely you would start charging a fee to each of the party guests ??

if you are going to treat her like a gangbang whore , then at least get the money for it .

lol

He knows she is a nympho, so why fight it. But after all this time, he should have learned to eat and love creampie. Lets read some more chapters.

Of the Nonconsent/Reluctance category? Or the Fetish category?

I'd love a turn with her whilst you hump my wife.

a common slut and a brainless provider and who got revenge on whom?

I got revenge on you. Hope that's clarified now. Thanks for commenting, dear anonymous reader!

Why don't you write a real erotic story, not this shit.

The only way you could make this story worth anything is to have not written it at all. Hope that if you have written any more stories that they aren't as bad as this one. But we shall see. Maybe.

The whole story stunk, who would act this way?

Why the hell did he not tell her what he had seen on that night at the party' it would have cleared the air. Instead of arranging a gang bang for his pregnant wife get a DNA paternity test done.

no stars

and how is this revenge. the whore is getting what she wants and also keeps the spineless husband.

He's a very sick cuck.

I love the game but this game has been very odd for me. We share my wife and I'm going to make sure we have her interest at hand.

What the hell kind of story is this?

Another nothing story of of a low life cuck and whore.

A slut and her pimp. So what?

I normally don't read stories like this, but I thought maybe the husband would do something that would take balls. If you come on something like that , you go ballistic, and start beating, shooting, or otherwise expressing your displeasure. That's what a husband, and real man does. You break things, beat people, especially drunks. And who the hell throws a party for a CROWD LIKE THAT??? Then you don't go to work thee next day- you confront your wife and file. She was sober and awake enough to know what was going on. And when the kid was born, you get a paternity test and don't put your name on the birth certificate. This was in England, wasn't it ??? "Sod off, pig ???". The Bear was really pissed at this. NO stars. If I knew of a way to give a negative rating, I would, but I probably can't go far enough negative to express my feelings. The Bear expects better. THIS SUCKED.

The BEAR

Sorry...but it probably shouldn't have been written....

He pumps his wife out. Wow. How sick.

This is a sick story and i gave it only one star

Couldn't be anymore stupid. We had a party. I noticed Ava was missing. Dumb ass was in our spare bedroom with 1 guy on her and 4 others waiting I guessed. I grabbed our son's ball bat after getting my brother for backup. I went to the bedroom and started smacking home runs and my brother was throwing them out through the window. Actually I didn't think of it at the time and when I did it was to late to check for drugs. Ava the way she acted and talking to different friends in the medical field she was probably drugged. I had showed her pictures later and she was sick. Thankfully she didn't get pregnant. When ever we had or went to a party we kept an eye on each other. The assholes that was with her knew to keep their distance.

This is a gem of a story. Well, not really. It should be deleted & burned. I wonder if this author's other stories are as bad & sickening as this one was. Seriously, he actually gave a party so other men could fuck his wife?

Is the author as cum sucking wimpy as his character. Anyone want to bet?

That pussy was used as a cum dump for lots of guys in one night...she was drunk and used by many dicks in one orgy like party....

What the shit is this? "I'm going to punish my wife for fucking a bunch of guys by making her fuck a bunch of guys and allowing her to become comfortable at a party where she gets fucked by a bunch of guys all while raising someone else's baby and not actually getting any myself." Congrats on being the most popular cuck with all the bulls, you wimpy ass pussy. Dude is probably the author.