All Comments on 'Party Mom Ch. 01'

Really, great stuff. I hope you keep writing and keep posting it here, cause I'll keep reading it.

great writing!

damn your stories are so hot

dude ur the ultimate story teller lol,, also make a chapter 3 to my friends and my milf mom please lol ur the best

This was excellently written and I hope the sequel emerges soon.

WHOA... That was an amazing story. Probably the hottest I've read on here. Ch. 02, please! You are a master wordsmith.

Great story and love the writing. The best part is you could almost believe something like it could happen.

i wish that yummy mummy would suck my popsicle like she did to those 2 lucky guys,i love these ackward son and milf storys

so was the girl mad when she said she didnt know what the mom did to her boy friend and said she must have sucked his balls dry? how did that happen anyways? the mom was just laying there so stoned, and what the 2 boys ditched there girl friends and walked to the mom and she just sucked them so much that they had no energy left? and how come they left in such a hurray? and how come there pants were missing? and did the girlfriends already know that the mom was blowing them in the house and they didnt care? lol this story is hot please make more milf storys there awsome!!!

I quit reading once "you" (the narrator) stated to masturbating to a girl for the "past 10 years after she hit puberty in the 5th grade".

Great story.

However, a deeper explanation of the genie would have helped. How long was he in the bottle? If a significant period of time has passed, what difficulties would he have in adapting to the modern world?

Just kidding.

The t-shirts were a fantastic idea, and while the magical component wasn't my cup of tea, the execution was great. The image of her sucking cum from the wand was perfect. I loved the idea of it first inflicting itself on her externally, then having her internalize it.

Thank you for the story.

Sorry, my previous comment was misposted, it was intended for another of your stories.

On one hand you can't help but feel sorry for Chad, but he is his own worse enemy, because he really doesn't "get into it:/ The Sonny might have been a great looker, but she

couldn't give Chad "the time of day", which wasn't really nice.

Jpsh was atleast trying to make some attempt his friend had some action. And the Mom

was probably a really "hot number", but far too muchg was implied, and it would have been far better if it was spelled out.-Eatandbemerry

ending sucked

God, this story is hot! I busted a nut to it while i was reading. Definitely one of the best stories I have read on this site. Keep up the fantastic work! The mom is amazing! I wish my mom was like that, especially with my friends.

But it leaves all kinds of things to explore. How was Sonny helping? How many loads where pumped into his MILF Mom? Did Sonny clean her pussy after then kiss Mom to share? Did Sonny sit on Mom's face as she was fucked the second time? Or did Josh sample her tight ass the second time and unload in it? I am glad the idea of the son might at some point suck some cock (gay) has been brought up. Great lead up to another story.

Why aren't you back yet...PURPLEMONKEYDISHWASH

YOU MAKE US CUM LIKE CRAZY WITH STORIES LIKE THESE...

WE CANT WAIT FOR ANOTHER STORY DUDE

Story should continue.

I'm making the assumption that all the positive reviews here are from cuckolds. That's the only way it makes any sense to me. This is in the incest section but Chad is literally nothing more than an observer. His mother is a sorry excuse for a parent and every single fucking paragraph I would ask allowed, "why the fuck are you here Chad?!" Not to mention that the writing was so awful I had to read some paragraphs twice just to try to understand whom was speaking to whom.

I can't fathom how anyone can comment how "excellent" this story is. But, to each their own.

Christ i should have looked at the tags. Such a tease of a story.

Stupid story. If l was Chad l’d kick Moms ass big time and l’d kick Josh’s ass too. What a bunch of cunts

1/5

Comedy tag needed!!!!! This story is fucking stupid.

Does the mother can speak? Not one conversation with her in the morning. So lame