All Comments on 'Passion Reborn'

Very good first try. Sweet story about changing things for the better. The idea of fixing things before they get real bad is one I'd like to see more of. Well done, I hope to see more from you.

I think this is one of the best, well-done, and most enjoyable stories I've read. Excellent job and I hope to see more from you soon!

As I read your story, I couldn't help but feel as if you were right there with my lover and me the last time we were together. Even down to the whispered 'I love you's'. I could remember the feeling as she came twice in my arms and hugged me tightly and moaned loudly. And how I felt when I came inside of her. And how we spent the next half an hour or so just kissing and holding each other.

This one's a keeper........

I was feeling down the day I read your story. I'm in a long distance relationship which can sometimes leave me feeling lonely. While reading your story I realized I was just sad because I wanted to see my man. This helped me to realize that simple fact and fantisize about he and I. Thanks!

Very nice read!

Boyd

I like how you captured the reality of sex. Not some crazy, acrobatic swinging-from-the-ceiling-fan type of story. You made a seemingly normal encounter hot and fun to read.

Look forward to your next one.

Great story. You had a lot of heart in your characters and made them real. Something that I don't read about often. There are a few grammatical quirks in your story, but other than that, it's great. 5/5.

Great build up and story.

I literally felt everything. That was so sensual😍