All Comments on 'Patience Takes Up The Position'

by MoonCarrot

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

I need some smelling salts.... I'm feeling a bit lightheaded.

You have a deft hand at balancing Patience's nervousness, excitement and determination to be professional. Keeping the doctor entirely clinic in this process (so far) keeps the focus on Patience's internal workings, mental and physical. Nice balance of historical and erotic.

MoonCarrotMoonCarrotalmost 9 years agoAuthor

Encouraged by this site I have just reworked the Patience series into an Amazon eBook under the pen name Rian David

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