All Comments on 'Paula and the Two'

You see, I did read. Now for my critique. Sorry, my dear, but fifty percent is my best offer. What a waste of good margarine!

Regards, Kennewickian

makes me want to find a girl as artistic, creative and expressive as Paula. Maybe there is a little of Paula in Jacinta. I would sure love to have the chance to share ideas with her. I lack the expressiveness and imagination, but, perhaps I can learn. Maybe in a chat room, I can explore.

Not so great--But an a for effort

Nice description...but part of me wonders if it wasn't the "Reader's Digest Condensed" version?

the woman takes the lead in making a fantasy real. Here, the woman methodically purchases plastic sheeting and oils in contemplation of a very sensual MFM threesome. And the subtle ending lets the imagination roam. Bravo. A very nice vignette.