All Comments on 'Paula's First'

a winner, great ending, duh thanks for fucking my wife, you have the mind and imagination of a 6 year old.

a winner, great ending, duh thanks for fucking my wife, you have the mind and imagination of a 6 year old.

I like stories from a womans perspective. It's fun for me to be inside a womans head during sex. I hope there is a part two to this story.

I'm a 47 year old married mom,this story got me off ,my vibe got a heavyduty workout !! i do hope you are going to do another chapter or more !!!! Joan V @ The Jersey Shore

Wow Paula, just like Joan V your story got me going. I think you should write another. Love it. bobkit

00-What did anyone expect? Just another braindead swinging couple. He gets off watching her fuck anything male or female she gets better sex than she ever did before with anyone or anything that wants a shot at her. But it's okay thet still love each and he gets to eat all that cum from her cunt and then lick the rest out of her ass. Nasty! But of course swingers like Joan, and Bobkit will love these types of stories. Give it a half an hour and AGOODCUCKMAN will be reading this story and jerking off. And then preaching how anyone who doesn't think like him is somehow a bible thumper? W.T.F?

pile of shit of an empty couple (bio) who uses only cliches and think that makes it erotic. I have to say you both have no idea what erotic means that's why you think swinging must it be as it is the new fashion.

The sex was hot. Who cares if the last line was cheesey. Don't listen to idiots who have to leave anonymous feedback. It's just shitty to give someone a zero. They have no class. I think it was a great story line. Keep up the good work. I would love to see what other things this couple could get into.

Then I gave it 1*.

How to say..."I am really stupid on Literotica" by DWarnock. What is about these morons...are they really so stupid that they think they are hiding their desires? Their comments remind me of the guys hating gays and then being caught tap dancing in public restrooms as they offer other gays their oral skills.

Keep on posting...keep on saying..."I am so stupid and so hung up and so much trying to hide that I really, really, really want to be a sissy cuckold!"

Who really knows what another person feels or thinks. If the wife feels better about herself....why not ? A win for everyone. If the one annon. does not feel secure enough to read this........let alone do it........go read your bible .

Boom, this story STARTS with Sweetie already agreed to fucking a stranger, mostly at Hubby's bequest! Why would a newly married young lady want to do that? Why would a newly married young man want or need his wife to do that?

There went almost all of the seduction and most of the drama. The rest is just an accounting of the tryst's mechanics! And, in the end, there is no hint of Bull wanting to repeat, nor them wanting him to cum back - despite all three being very excited about how well the session worked out!

behest, not bequest!

Erosmosis sounds like an incurable STD. Story sounds like a cuck as pimp for a whorewife story. Both suck. Might catch something reading it.

Erosmosis sounds like an incurable STD. Story sounds like a cuck as pimp for a whorewife story. Both suck and you might catch something just reading it.

Story about a couple enjoying themselves as every couple has the right to do, if as some don't like these stories then why read them, find something else to do. Graphic description of sex was good.

fifteen16-your right, why read garbage? Can't help it if you crawled out of the sewer for this trash. Looked at the tags, decided it was going to be another piece of garbage and gave it a one star rating.

Got to love the comments, especially from the idiots who thought this was a hot story. It takes all kinds. One has to wonder why they keep whining about other's opinions?