All Comments on 'Paulina's Problem'

They get bored. They get other ideas. They write themselves into corners. You didn't pay anything for it so why get upset?

THIS IS GETTING TO BE A JOKE, AS I COMMENTED BEFORE . WHY DO WRITERS LEAVE YOU HANGING. IT'S NOT TIME, THEY WILL WRITE ANOTHER STORY RIGHT AFTER THE ONE THEY LEAVE UNFINISHED. LAROC OF AGES

Excellent start - this one could run and run.

Love the way you're dwelling on the transition of authority, seriously hot story.

Continue the sexy tease, don't let him have her too soon

Very promising premise, I look forward to your next installment. I hope you have Mum rediscovering her truly feminine side, and falling in love with the wardrobe requests of her son: lacy lingerie, suspender belts, sheer stockings, and stiletto heels that complement smart suits, pencil skirts and silk blouses.

This was an excellent beginning to a story with great potential. Do not lose the momentum that you have generated by failing to continue in a timely manner.

Please continue this story!!!!!!

....plot,it is well paced but it's going wankers ain't it Brit?-pistolpackinpete

Fairly tantalizing! But I thought eventually we'd get beyond hormonal daydreams. This is needlessly disappointing.

Yes, please keep it going.

You're moving along nicely.

Totaly boring.. I kept waiting for the "meat," but...nothing.. You are trying to be "literary" and not erotic!!

Good start and I hope there is more to this story about Pauliuna and her son. I like how the son was able to blackmail her and to start taking care of herself and making herself look sexy. I like the way you described her being dominated by him and his fantasy about her. I hope you write another chapter to this story.

Just not sure what to say about this one.

It has tonnes of possibility. The mind boggles.

Please take your time ... do not rush to a finish like others ... this story of yours has the beginnings of being not only a great tale but very erotic if handled well ... looking forward to reading on ...

I would hope that the son does indeed make his mom submissive to him. She lets him lead her anywhere he wants her to go . Be anything to him he wants her to be and fall totally in love with him as a man who will control her.

please do not do what some other writers do and rush the story. this has the potential to be a GREAT story. waiting for next one.