All Comments on 'Paul's Problem'

by simonandhelen

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prg0019prg0019over 7 years ago
Feel good ending

I enjoy forced mind control, gay, feminization stories that have the tables turned at the end in favor of the victim.

I appreciate the fact that your story ended with the protagonist rescued, all of the criminals in custody and mind control reversion for the victim.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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Great story, you should do a sequel

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53about 9 years ago
definitely interesting

You did a good job on the story. Any thoughts of a follow up "revenge" sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting Story

Well written, very hard stop reading, surprising ending.

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