All Comments on 'Pay First'

Great idea for a story and really well played out.

You are a great writer...read the whole story like I read a book.

This was a great story. Tight plotline, action, and lots of hot sex, it was great. Thanks for taking the time to write it...

needs to be finished wht happens to the girl when drugged girl has her ass used

My daughter Sophia started dating a drug dealer,she thought it was fun at first,driving around in fancy cars buying expensive clothes and jewelry,he soon got fed up of and gave her to his drug dealing friends to fuck! Sophia worshipped him and did everything he said! He would have his friends around and they would fuck Sophia,I parked outside where he lived one evening and watched groups of men going inside! Sophia's boyfriend saw me in my car and came over to me,don't fuck with me he said people get hurt when they do! Have you come to see how your daughter is doing? Get him out of the car he said to two of his minders,they grabbed me from my car and took me into the house and held me forcing me to watch numerous guys fucking Sophia! She's a good little slut for me her boyfriend said telling the guys to fuck her arsehole!