All Comments on 'Payal ki Jhankar Ch. 11'

by mughalpunjabi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Smashing!

Yet another eventful and sexy chapter in this wonderful story. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Marvelous

I would say it is a master piece every new chapter is more interesting.... Please continue the writing don't break the rhythm of your writing and our reading :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Superb but pleaseeee.....

Mughal another superb addition. But please, please, please have a chapter on Payals backstory. Why she became a hotwife, how she as able to reconcile her lifestyle with the fact that she was totally in love with her husband at th same time. Maybe a little flashback to her college years.

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