Payback in the Bedroom Ch. 01

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She was oblivious to his thoughts. She smiled at him and absently ran her leg up and down the back of his naked thigh. She gently caressed his strong shoulders. He brushed a few wisps of now-dry hair off her sweaty forehead. He softly traced the arc of one of her eyebrows with a fingertip.

His lips broke into a half-smile and he looked as if he was going to say something when there was another shy knock at the door.

They both froze, their eyes widening.

"Yes?" she called out.

"Mom?" It was her son.

He quickly but quietly rolled off of her. He pulled his pants back on and righted himself. She secured her robe around her waist and grabbed a rubber band on her nightstand for her disheveled hair. She moved to the door as he crouched in the shadows of the bedroom. She held up her pointer finger before she opened the door, hoping he could see it in the dark and willing him to understand that she meant she'd be back shortly. But this time, she thought deliriously, it would be of her own free will.

She was gone for several long minutes. When she returned to the bedroom, she locked the door and glanced around, looking for him. "Missing toy, now found," she explained, whispering.

But there was no answer.

"Hello? Are you here?" She felt rather foolish. She didn't even have a name to call out for. She turned the lights on. She looked under the bed, in the closet, even in the bathtub, but he was gone.

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Author's Note:

Thanks so much for reading my story! I'd love to hear what you thought about it. Chapter 2 (the final chapter [as it stands now]) is done; it just needs major reworking and editing on my part before I dare submit it. :)

Please feel free to leave me a public comment or send me a private email. I love hearing what you think, and I'll answer your emails if you leave me a return email address. Oh, and don't forget to give my story a rating!

It gives me great pleasure to see others enjoying something I've enjoyed creating.

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P.S. -- many thanks to dulcet_deb for being a fabulous content editor. She is great to bounce ideas off of!

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AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

I expected to hate this, but it was incredible. Beautifully, sensitively written and exquisitely hot.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Marvelous premise.

Beautifully written.

Lovely buildup.

Wonderfully written.

Would have liked it if she took some initiative. Reaching for his cock and balls. Maybe wrapping his cock between her breasts and titty fucking them for a while. Maybe a bit of edging with her hands and mouth.

Neverthe less, FIVE STARS.

Billy_Ray_BanBilly_Ray_Ban9 months ago

What a nice effort by this author. I really enjoyed reading this story. I also enjoyed the ending - hoping that this isn't the end of this little tale... If you know what I mean.. 5 Stars

LittleAngel_97LittleAngel_97about 1 year ago

Still obsessed with this story—waiting eagerly for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Amazing story. Crazy hot scene the one with the finger in the mouth and the kissing, my favourite part.

I did not enjoy the cum/come joke I think it is rather unrealistic to expect this confusion ever to happen mid sex. Ahhh what woman wouldn't want that guy to ravish her???

Thank you for this great story!

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