All Comments on 'Pearly Whites'

wish that would happen to me lulz

Oooh, I wish that were my dentist, he is tall blue-eyed blonde, and he has a new young dentist in his practice now who is also hot.

The opportunity to put some suggestions into the patient's mind while he's under would make a good follow up story. How long would it take to turn Brad into a sissy?

I like the premise, however the story lacks depth, detail and the action feels scattered and confused. Add more detail and slow things down a bit.