All Comments on 'Peek-a-boo'

by KennyWright

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KarensClit1990KarensClit1990almost 6 years ago
Unique story

I liked your descriptions of love.

The sex scene was brief but delicious!

Thank you for an unusual ghost story.

Da1337dudeDa1337dudeover 12 years ago
Awesome

Reminds me of something else (non-erotic) I did on the afterlife and emotion. Very original and entertaining.

4glory64glory6over 12 years ago
Imaginative

What a great feel-good take on the Halloween contest. It's one of the best I've read.

patientleepatientleeover 12 years ago
My favorite in this contest so far!

A really enjoyable read.

FirebrainFirebrainover 12 years ago
Gorgeous

...and heartfelt. I love the emotional dimension of this story even more than the sexual one (though that's still hot). And top marks for originality!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not your typical ghost story!

Fascinating and creative! Bittersweet, almost sad, but at the same time playful, fun and very steamy. My halloween vote goes to this one!

PennLadyPennLadyover 12 years ago
Wonderful

Loved it. Funny and sweet and hot. Nice job.

Thor99Thor99over 12 years ago
Great!

Loved the happy ending, and the sex was very hot! Keep it up.

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