All Comments on 'Penny’s Initiation'

Excellent work, very hot. Great pacing and build-up. My only critcism would be to give us more details of the ladies - hair color, height, eyes. But I loved it nonetheless. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Cheers!

....quid pro quo at the end, it tilted story too far into fantasy land, but it was fun to read about a couple who love each other.

I cant even begain to tell you how wrong this is, how can a husband set this up for his wife, and how can he agree to what is going to happen with him after that, and agree to cheat on his wife like that, it was bad enough being blindfolded, now she was tied up as well, the story says Penny's Initiation, to what

With the line "Suck my boobies. Mmm. Yes! Suck them!" I can't help but picture a crazy woman molesting a pair of blue-footed boobies. You should be ashamed for the unintentional animal cruelty.